tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post4286919636895129953..comments2024-03-10T10:34:02.181+02:00Comments on The Alliterative Allomorph: Flirt Scene Blog festJessica Bellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10889900730906728317noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-61759189468159067292010-05-20T21:31:02.534+03:002010-05-20T21:31:02.534+03:00good stuff...good stuff...Sugarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847639596079213091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-30207764774997150692010-05-18T05:04:16.800+03:002010-05-18T05:04:16.800+03:00I enjoyed them both :) I liked her preoccupation w...I enjoyed them both :) I liked her preoccupation with her hair in the second one. Very cute.Rebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-52204172372323053182010-05-18T03:58:42.727+03:002010-05-18T03:58:42.727+03:00Moral of the story..."Always wear your lacy p...Moral of the story..."Always wear your lacy panties & garters." Cause you never know! Again so good, so funny and totally didn't see it coming....You'll still comment on my blog when your famous right?? :)angelarenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13639436719051155045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-70799973545443772072010-05-18T02:00:27.066+03:002010-05-18T02:00:27.066+03:00Loved the ending of the first one. Too funny!Loved the ending of the first one. Too funny!Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-33424768487797806642010-05-18T00:04:09.369+03:002010-05-18T00:04:09.369+03:00Hey, Jessica! Those two stories were wonderful! I ...Hey, Jessica! Those two stories were wonderful! I really enjoyed the tension you created... Thanks for sharing!!! :D<br /><br />Btw, sorry about my black on black. I fixed it, though!Elizabeth Muellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06028099814857743134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-90984019755565215722010-05-17T07:54:31.621+03:002010-05-17T07:54:31.621+03:00Mary: thanks, Mary :)
Tessa: Nope, she never does...Mary: thanks, Mary :)<br /><br />Tessa: Nope, she never does get together with him, but there's a twist :)<br /><br />Mia: Jealous? LOL we just have different styles. I couldn't write like you either!<br /><br />MissV: Thanks :)<br /><br />Yvonne: ARen't we all guilty of if? :)<br /><br />Christine H: thank you :)<br /><br />Dawn: She's 30 years old. In the midst of way to much going on in her personal life and she got caught off guard :)<br /><br />Shelly: Thanks :)<br /><br />L & L: Oh yes, and I have MANY! lol<br /><br />Amalia: Yeah, looking forward to developing Brian further :)<br /><br />Tina: Thanks :)<br /><br />Clara: thank you!<br /><br />zoe: Thanks!<br /><br />Talli: Thanks!<br /><br />Christine D: Thanks!<br /><br />Roland: LOL too true :)<br /><br />Raquel: Thanks! Sorry didn't make it to your yesteday. I shall stop by today :)<br /><br />Sharon: 'raining desire' LOL thank you<br /><br />Bridge: Thanks!<br /><br />Courtney: Glad I could make you laugh! :)<br /><br />Jojamama: Hello! New face :) Thanks for dropping by! Um ... you can't get the book. I currently searching for an agent. Wish me luck!<br /><br />Jen: LOL, funny isn't. I haven't flirted with anyone for about 5 years!<br /><br />M. Bail: thanks for hosting!<br /><br />Bryan: YAY! Someone who thinks like me. I prefer the second too :) I prefer the atypical generally in life anyway. :) Thanks for stopping by!Jessica Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10889900730906728317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-88978040443132183932010-05-17T03:23:00.933+03:002010-05-17T03:23:00.933+03:00I'll swim against the crowd and say the second...I'll swim against the crowd and say the second one was my fav. Something about your voice made me think of Suzanne Vega's song, "Tom's Diner".<br /><br />This felt so real, like I was sitting a couple of stools over.<br /><br />Great job!Bryan Sabolhttp://timeguardiansaga.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-56448081209221128882010-05-17T03:17:56.050+03:002010-05-17T03:17:56.050+03:00Very nice! I agree with everyone..the garter comm...Very nice! I agree with everyone..the garter comment was awesome. Thanks for participating!!M. Bailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12811654487507824088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-56182860092833355492010-05-17T02:07:59.315+03:002010-05-17T02:07:59.315+03:00Your picture for the first story made it even more...Your picture for the first story made it even more enjoyable!!!<br /><br />Oh and you definitely have the flirting down to a science... but you knew that didn't you!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03667521490706435608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-19077075380342753362010-05-17T00:55:27.957+03:002010-05-17T00:55:27.957+03:00Big smile. Where are the black lacy ones when we n...Big smile. Where are the black lacy ones when we need them?<br />Fun read. Where can I get the book?<br /><br />http://jostorm.blogspot.com/Jo Schafferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11514820971898568397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-23713345224484877222010-05-17T00:17:32.366+03:002010-05-17T00:17:32.366+03:00The first was my favorite! Wonderful entries! I la...The first was my favorite! Wonderful entries! I laughed a few times and that is always a good thing. ;o)<br /><br />I am really enjoying this blogfest - such fun flirting going on ;o)<br /><br /><a href="http://princesscourtneysbarr.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Visit My Kingdom Anytime</a>Courtney Barr - The Southern Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14455508477182984039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-89478248355085781202010-05-16T23:10:50.793+03:002010-05-16T23:10:50.793+03:00Nice entries! I also liked the grey pantie line an...Nice entries! I also liked the grey pantie line and the internal dialogue of the first one, it made her really relatable. I really enjoyed the self-conciousness in the second one, too, you can just see her blushing.Bridge Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06687000732188023868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-53713003368682078432010-05-16T23:06:05.081+03:002010-05-16T23:06:05.081+03:00Both scenes were great, but I especially liked the...Both scenes were great, but I especially liked the first one. The sexual tension in it was so thick it was almost raining desire. Love it!Sharon Gerlachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03794318894344310715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-35157445241089930702010-05-16T22:56:15.601+03:002010-05-16T22:56:15.601+03:00I liked both entries but the first was my favorite...I liked both entries but the first was my favorite. I liked the chiding internal dialogue...the moving so he couldn't touch her...but wishing that he would. Also the line about the panties being faded...classic.<br /><br />Great post!Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-1396788474597339072010-05-16T22:34:12.943+03:002010-05-16T22:34:12.943+03:00Jessica, it would seem everyone liked the "Sc...Jessica, it would seem everyone liked the "Scratch. I'm not wearing garters" scene. Me, too.<br /><br />How often our words/actions are direct opposites of our desires. Being civilized sure is no fun sometimes. Have a safe week, RolandRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-41257090480136453582010-05-16T20:21:06.990+03:002010-05-16T20:21:06.990+03:00I really love the flower panties. I thoroughly enj...I really love the flower panties. I thoroughly enjoyed both of these. Nicely done!Christine Danekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00979611961825725350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-30406873459367612492010-05-16T19:41:28.322+03:002010-05-16T19:41:28.322+03:00Crappy 'ole panties indeed! :) Great stuff!Crappy 'ole panties indeed! :) Great stuff!Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-2471484961558086422010-05-16T19:11:56.059+03:002010-05-16T19:11:56.059+03:00Hey, Jessica! These were great. Especially the fir...Hey, Jessica! These were great. Especially the first one, you totally captured that fumbling nervousness, which ratcheted up that tension beautifully! Well done! Mine's over on my blog - this was a fun one :DZoe C. Courtmanhttp://zoecourtman.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-11754402953073428472010-05-16T15:16:27.785+03:002010-05-16T15:16:27.785+03:00I loved both but the first scene was so cool, it m...I loved both but the first scene was so cool, it made all happenings go on my head clear as day, as if I was watching a movie. Loved it!!Clarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00062728322162370588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-63001612333610870412010-05-16T10:49:25.717+03:002010-05-16T10:49:25.717+03:00Loved them both, but the hotness level of the firs...Loved them both, but the hotness level of the first one was just what the doctor ordered:) The picture was perfect.Tina Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05914428134837892539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-55912103132161191552010-05-16T08:31:47.206+03:002010-05-16T08:31:47.206+03:00Definitely agree that the picture to go with the f...Definitely agree that the picture to go with the first scene is PERFECT. I loved the line about her underwear at the end! haha.<br /><br />The second scene was really cute. Brian seems like a nice guy with a good sense of humor!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-30543835363625920432010-05-16T05:44:12.007+03:002010-05-16T05:44:12.007+03:00Ha! The flowered knickers made me laugh out loud. ...Ha! The flowered knickers made me laugh out loud. I think we all have at least one pair of underwear that's all grey and wonky after getting mixed in with the jeans. Love it.lisa and laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18144863275895761642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-69319001845036480412010-05-16T05:29:54.576+03:002010-05-16T05:29:54.576+03:00I like both of these! Nicely done!I like both of these! Nicely done!Shelley Slyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07981620646634240160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-74528027984646815682010-05-16T05:10:38.428+03:002010-05-16T05:10:38.428+03:00Great entry!
The picture with the first one is f...Great entry! <br /><br />The picture with the first one is fun but I wondered about the main characters age. The way she talked and the stuttering, I don't, something about it made me wonder. And I automatically added a "that" after "Scratch", lol. It just kept happening. Love that part by the way.<br /><br />I like the first one a little more. It had a little more awkwardness and spunk to it. The second was still good.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-53900122304391195962010-05-16T03:30:39.140+03:002010-05-16T03:30:39.140+03:00Really well done. I enjoyed both of these a lot!Really well done. I enjoyed both of these a lot!Nighfalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01745824744507928211noreply@blogger.com