tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post3920613759867800090..comments2024-03-10T10:34:02.181+02:00Comments on The Alliterative Allomorph: The Artist Unleashed: A MAD MAN TRIED TO KILL ME, by Jeremiah WaltonJessica Bellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10889900730906728317noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-61664907495135719392014-02-14T07:17:13.285+02:002014-02-14T07:17:13.285+02:00Holy hell, am I glad I made it too. This led to a...Holy hell, am I glad I made it too. This led to a sequence of less than safe events, that I have yet to be able to communicate the urgency of through prose. Poetry is where that slab of meat in my chest lies. I'm glad you dug the piece Theresa, cheers!Konongohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15711653445812652648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-36448438531315072052014-02-14T07:14:51.932+02:002014-02-14T07:14:51.932+02:00I'm truly thankful for your kind words :) Tha...I'm truly thankful for your kind words :) Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you dug the piece. Cheers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-52191143423918409122014-02-14T07:13:24.484+02:002014-02-14T07:13:24.484+02:00For the most part, except for the man, those are a...For the most part, except for the man, those are all the actual names of the people involved. I'm glad you dig it, cheers! And thanks for the birthday wish!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-76621454940854901982014-02-14T07:11:52.043+02:002014-02-14T07:11:52.043+02:00I laughed when I was introduced to the cat as well...I laughed when I was introduced to the cat as well ahah I'm glad you dig it. If you're interested in some of my other pieces, I post regularly at Gatsby's Abandoned Children<br /><br />www.jeremiahwaltonnostroviapoetry.wordpress.com<br /><br />Cheers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-22052488513404966532014-02-14T07:10:45.441+02:002014-02-14T07:10:45.441+02:00Ahahah don't apologize. We all should have a ...Ahahah don't apologize. We all should have a little bit of Mom in us for our fellow people. Thanks for the birthday wishes, cheers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-14826634838494044412014-02-14T07:09:46.822+02:002014-02-14T07:09:46.822+02:00I'm currently stagnant in a dead pond, but hum...I'm currently stagnant in a dead pond, but humans are luckily the greatest writing prompt. Thanks for reading and the kind words. Cheers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-84259081116985554402014-02-14T07:08:31.264+02:002014-02-14T07:08:31.264+02:00All of my publications are available free online a...All of my publications are available free online at Gatsby's Abandoned Children, my personal site. I have an upcoming collection of poems titled Witch-hunting Gatsby's Children if you're interested! Shoot me an email, and I can send it your way!<br /><br />www.jeremiahwaltonnostroviapoetry.wordpress.comKonongohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15711653445812652648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-68427757597126006072014-02-14T07:07:05.593+02:002014-02-14T07:07:05.593+02:00I just kind of haphazardly run around exploding an...I just kind of haphazardly run around exploding and doing what I can. Glad it struck the right spot with you, cheers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-55455456237777580592014-02-14T07:03:45.919+02:002014-02-14T07:03:45.919+02:00I just kind of haphazardly run around exploding an...I just kind of haphazardly run around exploding and doing what I can. Glad it struck the right spot with you, cheers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-63341019639299964302014-02-14T02:11:03.521+02:002014-02-14T02:11:03.521+02:00Wow! What a gorgeous writing style you have! I rea...Wow! What a gorgeous writing style you have! I really like this part, "...beautiful moments where we feel God, an artist lost in painting, a poet lost in his mad scribble, a serial killer pleasuring himself to remnants, a scientist and discovery, the God-moments are what I live for." and the black hole? Very evocative!<br /><br />Keep up the great work, and best of luck to you, Jeremiah! Thanks for stopping by~ <3LTMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05239077455322030275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-75447264570572394532014-02-13T18:10:44.520+02:002014-02-13T18:10:44.520+02:00Lots of creativity here, Jeremiah. The tone is wel...Lots of creativity here, Jeremiah. The tone is well done, too. I love your character names, especially that cat. Haha! It gives character and individuality to your piece, which has loads of promise. Oh, and Happy Belated B-day!!!S.A. Larsenッhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-89699387534043056632014-02-13T16:01:55.865+02:002014-02-13T16:01:55.865+02:00I'm still laughing at Screw the Cat - ha! Some...I'm still laughing at Screw the Cat - ha! Some great writing in here, and just out of high school. Keep writing! And thank you for sharing. Dawn Iushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546425873531022196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-76772230578274997582014-02-13T15:41:06.678+02:002014-02-13T15:41:06.678+02:00Love your God moments! And your creative enthusias...Love your God moments! And your creative enthusiasm. Stay safe, young man! (Sorry, that's the mom in me speaking) Happy Birthday!Susan Kaye Quinnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07348197999397141067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-3961904941475708112014-02-13T13:14:39.176+02:002014-02-13T13:14:39.176+02:00Nice to meet you, Jeremiah. Very cool that you'...Nice to meet you, Jeremiah. Very cool that you're writing. A lot of people say they want to write but don't actually do it. <br />Glad you made it through the angry brother experience!Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-22392895111206264322014-02-13T11:55:00.496+02:002014-02-13T11:55:00.496+02:00Some really great lines in there, and a captivatin...Some really great lines in there, and a captivating subject. Can't wait to see what inspiration your travels give you!Amie McCrackenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13160695804142859960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-30350579709729998002014-02-13T11:19:52.589+02:002014-02-13T11:19:52.589+02:00What an intense piece Jeremiah, you grabbed my att...What an intense piece Jeremiah, you grabbed my attention and held it until the end. I only wish there was more to read. Thank you for sharing with us and Belated Happy Birthday. Safe travels and keep writing! Elise Fallsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14734537117333738468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-70845276514011148042014-02-13T10:57:48.542+02:002014-02-13T10:57:48.542+02:00Wow, this is powerful writing, Jeremiah - you'...Wow, this is powerful writing, Jeremiah - you're definitely one to watch in future! Good luck with all your writing activities, and keep going - this is a fabulous era in which to be a writer, with digital technology able to put you right in front of your audience (a benefit Kerouac never had!) Happy birthday for yesterday too! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-22995561974484811672014-02-13T10:48:04.435+02:002014-02-13T10:48:04.435+02:00How thrilling and unnerving at same time. Thanks f...How thrilling and unnerving at same time. Thanks for sharing. You lead an interesting writing life, Jeremiah.Glynis Peters https://www.blogger.com/profile/01175378917872403609noreply@blogger.com