tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post8592318767250048034..comments2024-03-10T10:34:02.181+02:00Comments on The Alliterative Allomorph: Chains, Velvet, Twisted Grace; Help me out with this small case?Jessica Bellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10889900730906728317noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-46578693378332603392011-02-02T19:43:35.000+02:002011-02-02T19:43:35.000+02:00Little late to party here, but here's my two c...Little late to party here, but here's my two cents: Chained GraceKaren Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01522178275164058849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-89191108985377348742011-02-02T19:29:37.683+02:002011-02-02T19:29:37.683+02:00I know I'm late for the party, but here's ...I know I'm late for the party, but here's my two cents - Graced in ChainsKaren Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01522178275164058849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-85487870598669981372011-02-02T16:30:50.416+02:002011-02-02T16:30:50.416+02:00I like 'still holding my breath'.. I think...I like 'still holding my breath'.. I think this title would draw me to read this poem more than the others.. but I'm dramatic so<br /><br />- SYSYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133339104832835879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-61845565208625130552011-02-02T11:12:18.504+02:002011-02-02T11:12:18.504+02:00Personally, I really like 'Still Holding My Br...Personally, I really like 'Still Holding My Breath'. There's a real sense of quietness to it, and something dark as well... I think it best evokes the mood that you're trying to achieve. <br /><br />(All of your possible titles actually put me in mind of the poem 'The Lady of Shallot' - go figure).Allison Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05033364798801012466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-76625030394365306762011-02-02T09:51:43.028+02:002011-02-02T09:51:43.028+02:00As you know I liked Velvet Steel. Now I am liking ...As you know I liked Velvet Steel. Now I am liking Twisted Velvet Chains.Glynis Peters https://www.blogger.com/profile/01175378917872403609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-6021473300214436112011-02-02T08:07:01.761+02:002011-02-02T08:07:01.761+02:00Chained Velvet.Chained Velvet.Christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17045294003088106262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-63568822409990116262011-02-02T01:36:24.778+02:002011-02-02T01:36:24.778+02:00I like Twisted Grace as well. But I'm still no...I like Twisted Grace as well. But I'm still not sure if any are as compelling as the writing. :)Juleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02136045025997662057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-89958035489179870322011-02-01T22:49:50.456+02:002011-02-01T22:49:50.456+02:00I had the same problems when I wanted to put my po...I had the same problems when I wanted to put my poems in a book.<br /><br />After what you been through as a child how about "I'm Still Standing"<br /><br />Yvonne,RHYTHM AND RHYMEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11386975261804630799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-66732197261271746822011-02-01T22:27:02.382+02:002011-02-01T22:27:02.382+02:00Twisted Grace. I'd pick it up just to find out...Twisted Grace. I'd pick it up just to find out what that is.<br /><b><a href="http://nitewriter6.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Edge of Your Seat Romance</a></b>Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-36251515648076952452011-02-01T21:47:45.510+02:002011-02-01T21:47:45.510+02:00ew! Velvet chains. For sure. And funny--I made tha...ew! Velvet chains. For sure. And funny--I made that comment to Matt before even visiting~<br /><br />must be in a velvety mood... ;pLTMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05239077455322030275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-22690821656645898892011-02-01T21:37:18.494+02:002011-02-01T21:37:18.494+02:00Still Holding my Velvet Chains?
Breaking the Chain...Still Holding my Velvet Chains?<br />Breaking the Chains! Wait, that's an 80's song by Dokken...Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-9709420147235078882011-02-01T20:06:57.954+02:002011-02-01T20:06:57.954+02:00I like Twisted Grace, but Velvet Chains is nice to...I like Twisted Grace, but Velvet Chains is nice too!Carolyn Abiadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10567399129586443513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-3911380640613589862011-02-01T20:02:35.332+02:002011-02-01T20:02:35.332+02:00I left a comment on the other blog. Loved your wri...I left a comment on the other blog. Loved your writing. My favorite title is Twisted Grace.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08798243128846248604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-63076304999015040352011-02-01T19:59:50.641+02:002011-02-01T19:59:50.641+02:00I like 'Twisted Velvet,' which isn't o...I like 'Twisted Velvet,' which isn't one you listed, but it has a nice ring to it. :) Just a thought. 'Velvet Chains' is good too. I like having 'velvet' in there because it's so exotic and mysterious and dark...Melodyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08846251713093236356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-15815149340432299722011-02-01T19:20:32.717+02:002011-02-01T19:20:32.717+02:00From the list you suggested,
I like Twisted Chai...From the list you suggested, <br /><br />I like Twisted Chains.<br /><br />:-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-87129540290487969882011-02-01T18:41:54.589+02:002011-02-01T18:41:54.589+02:00I'm torn between Velvet Chains and Twisted Gra...I'm torn between Velvet Chains and Twisted Grace. Without getting a feel for the entire collection, I can't say which is more fitting.<br /><br />Or, you could take Bish's suggestion and use the name of one of your poems. (I do like <i>Tears Like Ethanediol</i>, but suspect it would lead to a larger amount of misspelled Google searches.)Nate Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690171790664252309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-11869026509690239622011-02-01T18:06:12.867+02:002011-02-01T18:06:12.867+02:00I like Velvet Chains the best! :-)I like Velvet Chains the best! :-)Shannon O'Donnellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17299313309059235876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-4445205066326345982011-02-01T17:54:26.067+02:002011-02-01T17:54:26.067+02:00I love twisted chains. Such a great title! Matthe...I love twisted chains. Such a great title! Matthew had a great title too.Carolyn V.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15456210036213016603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-58390737724624534202011-02-01T17:53:25.559+02:002011-02-01T17:53:25.559+02:00I like Velvet chains.
It's steely with a sof...I like Velvet chains. <br /><br />It's steely with a soft edge.<br /><br /><br />MichaelMichael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-74713693278210622192011-02-01T17:50:26.823+02:002011-02-01T17:50:26.823+02:00Velvet Chains really jumped out at me, evoking the...Velvet Chains really jumped out at me, evoking the sofness/richness that motherhood should be juxtaposed against the chains of addiction that bind the addict and the child. But any of these would be good.Melissa Gillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02700191547004665402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-46168820439187258132011-02-01T16:48:31.957+02:002011-02-01T16:48:31.957+02:00I like Still Holding My Breath, too. It suggests ...I like Still Holding My Breath, too. It suggests that hope most people who survive sad childhoods hold: that some day the past will be different.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01899768909313326172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-74835257933423681972011-02-01T16:39:55.298+02:002011-02-01T16:39:55.298+02:00Considering the subject matter why not Molecular C...Considering the subject matter why not <i>Molecular Chain Reaction</i> or a part thereof?<br /><br>Jim Murdochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-35463390014199409402011-02-01T16:22:50.619+02:002011-02-01T16:22:50.619+02:00I like Twisted Grace...I like Twisted Grace...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-17261803807373188972011-02-01T15:31:34.512+02:002011-02-01T15:31:34.512+02:00So I really adore Fit for a Coffin.... maybe it...So I really adore Fit for a Coffin.... maybe it's just a side effect of having a funeral director for a father... but I would make a BEELINE for a book titled Fit for a Coffin if I saw one on the store shelf.Artemis Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10849091563671031929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3315861630765119669.post-21525987488479555782011-02-01T14:53:50.610+02:002011-02-01T14:53:50.610+02:00Something tugs at me when I read: Still Holding My...Something tugs at me when I read: Still Holding My Breath. Not sure why. I like the idea of velvet and steel. The abrasion it creates visually is nice.<br /><br />I love that you're doing this.S.A. Larsenッhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.com