Thanks to all who dropped by yesterday! The answer to yesterday's post was, AWE. Mind you, Lenny suggested that she felt 'abducted' which I thought was pretty cool. Nice one, Lenny!
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Nili squints at the clock, wondering if it's possible for the hands to slow down when she does. She holds her hands out in front of her--dirty fingernails--then scrapes the dirt out from below her thumb nail with her right incisor, spits it onto her fingers, and rubs it on her jeans. No one's home anyway. She grabs the nearest magazine, hubbie's Motor Monster, and flicks through with a sigh. She looks at the clock again. She swears it's got a face, like the man on the moon. She gets up and goes to the fridge, opens it, and scans its contents for something sweet. Nothing bloody sweet. She clicks her tongue and searches her loft for the remote control. She spots it in the cat's bed, grabs it, blows off some cat hair and swtiches the TV on, changes channels without comprehending anything she sees, then swtiches it off again. I guess I'll just make myself another coffee.
So, can you guess the emotion/feeling (a noun) depicted in this piece that begins with the letter ‘B’? Please nip over to Nicole's blog to read her interpretation of our B-prompt word. Here’s the link!
If you are new to this blog please read the note in the header above this post so you know what to do! Thanks!
Nili squints at the clock, wondering if it's possible for the hands to slow down when she does. She holds her hands out in front of her--dirty fingernails--then scrapes the dirt out from below her thumb nail with her right incisor, spits it onto her fingers, and rubs it on her jeans. No one's home anyway. She grabs the nearest magazine, hubbie's Motor Monster, and flicks through with a sigh. She looks at the clock again. She swears it's got a face, like the man on the moon. She gets up and goes to the fridge, opens it, and scans its contents for something sweet. Nothing bloody sweet. She clicks her tongue and searches her loft for the remote control. She spots it in the cat's bed, grabs it, blows off some cat hair and swtiches the TV on, changes channels without comprehending anything she sees, then swtiches it off again. I guess I'll just make myself another coffee.
So, can you guess the emotion/feeling (a noun) depicted in this piece that begins with the letter ‘B’? Please nip over to Nicole's blog to read her interpretation of our B-prompt word. Here’s the link!
I'm going to bored, bored, bored.
ReplyDeleteBoredom! That's actually the same theme I picked for my post today.
ReplyDeleteI have to go with boredom too! :)
ReplyDeleteBoredom for sure.
ReplyDeleteI guess boredom also.
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing Jessica.
Have a good week-end.
Yvonne.
I have to agree - boredom :)
ReplyDeleteHmmm blissful boredom? ;-)
ReplyDeleteBittersweet boredom :)
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So much great characterization! I could see every movement vividly. Awesome entry, Jess!
ReplyDeleteYeah, bored. Boredom.
ReplyDeleteMy guess to your fabulous 'B' post is Bored! That pulling the dirt from under her nail with her tooth really grossed me. LOL
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Boredom!
ReplyDeleteLike everyone else, I have to say boredom. Isn't that a boring response?
ReplyDeleteGreat fun...bored. :)
ReplyDeleteBored boredom. Yup :) Nice job, Jessica!
ReplyDeleteMy guess is bored!
ReplyDeleteBoredom. I'm actually yawning as I typed the word LOL!
ReplyDeleteEveryone took my guess, so to be different, I like being different, I choose: burp. has to follow the dirt under the nails :)
ReplyDeleteJules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow
Bordum. Definitely!
ReplyDeleteI would have to guess bored.
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive post. Love the incisor nail cleaning-a too true and human behavior. I'm guessing boredom. Now for Nicole's...
ReplyDeleteIs boredom an emotion or a state of consciousness? Oh, well, I'm going with boredom, too.
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boredom.
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Bored for sure...Nice story, Jessica! I'm on my way to check out your pal. :-)
ReplyDeleteI'm guessing bored definitely. Nice scene given here. =)
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My guess (boredom) has been taken many times over, but just wanted to say fantastic post! My B word for today was Bowie, as in David Bowie. Super fun :)
ReplyDeleteSarah Allen
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Definitely bored, which if it is true, was wonderfully depicted. Talk about show without telling.
ReplyDeleteNow if it is not boredom and it is something like "breasts" or "binoculars" then you might want to polish up on your descriptions. Ha.
Love this.
Yawn!
ReplyDeleteLC
BORED, she is on autopilot, looking for something to capture her interest!
ReplyDeleteI mentioned you today on my B post
;-D Happy Saturday to you n' yours~
I'm going with boredom too :)
ReplyDeleteYep, bored. I'll go with that one, much as I'd love to be original... ok maybe blindingly bored? bored bitchy? bored blue in the face?
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Well boring is something you are not! Love your writing.
ReplyDeleteGrace and Peace
blatantly bad and boring!
ReplyDeleteBlithering boredom!
ReplyDeleteGreat writing to meet the alphabetical challenge.
This is great! She's BORED. =d
ReplyDeleteIs she bored? LOL.
ReplyDeleteEllie Garratt
Definitely bored - well, I wasn't, but it sounds like she is. :)
ReplyDeleteBoredom, lol...
ReplyDeleteI LOVE this as your theme, Jessica! Aren't you a clever girl... a riddle with the answer in the letter... I'm going with boredom, which even though I tried not to look, seems to be a popular choice. I just want to give you kudos though, on this original take on the challenge. Not easy to stun me into thinking 'damn! I wish I'd thought of that!'
ReplyDeleteNo doubt that this is bored! :)
ReplyDeleteThe word is "boredom"
ReplyDeleteNo need to guess bored now...
ReplyDeleteThat's boredom, of course!
ReplyDeleteFabulous idea sharing the A-Z challenge..my response on nicole's site was this...
ReplyDelete"Watching grass grow is often more exciting than some relationships, has to be "bored" definitely not "bewitched bothered or bewildered"
Stop by my post if you have a moment.
here:
http://sooozsaysstuff.blogspot.com/2011/04/a-z-challenge-day-3-c-crocodile-with.html
Hi Jessica. Sounds like a lot of people were 'bored' by this post, ha ha.
ReplyDeleteDenise<3
I'll definitely have to go with boredom.
ReplyDeleteBoredom it is, and a very clever theme and team effort for the A-Z Challenge! Great job you two!
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Great idea ... BORED? :) Happy B-day. I'm a new follower from the A-Z Challenge - nice to meet you! :)
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Boredom :o) and no I haven't tried banoffee pie. I had to google it! ooh it looks so sickly sweet and delicious :o)))
ReplyDelete...zzz...um, I mean, bored. Love the extreme detail - it really works well for this prompt.
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I just saw your trailer and was BLOWN AWAY. Such a haunting and beautiful song. Great visuals...bravo. =)
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I Believe the noun would be a bore.
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Boredom? Intriguing paragraph and very well conveyed. What a neat strategy! Love, love.
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Reflections on Writing
Well this is interesting. Your post seems obviously to be speaking of 'boredom' but on your friend Nicole's post, 'betrayal' seemed to be the most appropriate word!
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Hi greetings from The Farm. I'm going with Boredom too.
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Life on The Farm
Bored out of one's mind, to put it politely ;)
ReplyDeleteLove the paragraph, sums it up perfectly :)
Visiting from the A-Z Blogging Challenge. Nice to "meet" you! I'm a new follower. Have a great Sunday and a fun A-Z April :-)
ReplyDeleteReally cool blog, I'm also participating in the challenge. Although, mine wasn't about boredom...but nice subject :)
ReplyDeleteYup, boredom! Love what you and Nicole are doing.
ReplyDeleteBoredom for sure. Just popped over from Nicole's blog, to say Hi and check you out.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you two are teaming up on this challenge.
Fellow A to Zer
Pamela Jo
http://theresjustlifeyaliveit.blogspot.com
Bored
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ReplyDeleteI'm going with boredom.
(You must be really bored by that answer by now, Jessica. LOL!)
aah, boredom :)
ReplyDeleteLyn
W.I.P. It: A Writer's Journey
Visiting from the A-Z Challenge. Boredom, plain and simple.
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Yep, have to go with Bored. Loved how you showed this, I think it's an awesome idea for the Challenge!
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